This writing is among the most beautiful anti-slop writing I've seen in a while -- there's such an essential humanity here that is captured brilliantly and beautifully in the language, pacing, punctuation, and content.
She chose one direction and it wore down her trudging shoes just a little more on one side, and little by little the imbalance in her shoes increased to the point that going the opposite direction would be uncomfortable.
The writing in this made me unreasonably happy.
Same. A person expressing something they learned which made them happy and which they wanted to share with the world.
This writing is among the most beautiful anti-slop writing I've seen in a while -- there's such an essential humanity here that is captured brilliantly and beautifully in the language, pacing, punctuation, and content.
More of this please!
> The other week I was trudging through laps around the court I live on...
I wonder if she was going clockwise or counterclockwise?
She chose one direction and it wore down her trudging shoes just a little more on one side, and little by little the imbalance in her shoes increased to the point that going the opposite direction would be uncomfortable.