My Friend Aaron

(rorz.io)

93 points | by sarreph 2 hours ago ago

19 comments

  • JohnMakin 17 minutes ago

    I think this short story resonates because probably most people know an Aaron - the type that is incessantly looking for some kind of scheme, some kind of get rich quick thing, and will spend exponentially far more effort and misery suffered avoiding real employment than it would take actually just sucking it up and working, and often (usually) with much, much worse results. Yet they persist. A few of them become successful founders, probably, depending on their background. But most don't.

    • JohnMakin a few seconds ago

      When I was around that age, my Aaron was this kid who matched a similar description, very bright but utterly averse to any kind of work whatsoever, never finished his education, did okay in school but underperformed a lot.

      I remember a few of his dumbest schemes - one, he would get gift visa cards, run the balance down to pennies, then as a restaurant server for some crappy chain, would charge a customer with a big tip, put it on the drained card, and due to some weird quirk with the way they processed tips back then, the money would hit his paycheck before the decline would happen. I pointed out it was stupid easy to get caught by the bank and his restaurant but he insisted it was genius and foolproof. Got caught in a month or two, fired, nearly got in a lot of legal trouble but somehow got out of it.

      His all time dumbest 'scheme' was when a major automaker was going into bankruptcy at some point during the financial crisis, the stock was pennies. So he invested all his savings, some thousands of dollars, into buying the stocks. Even being so young and barely financially literate at that point I was aghast, tried to explain that when the bankruptcy finishes, his stock will be worth nothing. No, no, he assured me - imagine - this stock was $20 before, when it's $20 again I'll be a gazillionaire. I tried very very hard to convince him that was not correct and of course he lost everything. Shortly after he got into dealing marijuana but by that point I had determined he wasn't worth hanging out with anymore. No idea what happened to him.

  • corndoge 37 minutes ago

    I like it because each individual piece can happen and we probably all know people by now that have some aspect of Aaron - massive AI use, or into prediction markets, or live streaming, or just a friend who we have learned over time lacks scruples, or have watched them fade in response to life's challenges. The combination of all of these is then easy to imagine and that idea makes a good story.

  • greenfish6 an hour ago

    Powerful. And written so well, I thought it was real at first, I even forgot about the "this is a short story at the top" and googled Aaron's different betting websites

  • curuinor 2 hours ago

    Murder is always systematically kind of a dramatic act. We are definitely going to get a prediction market murder in <5 years, I think.

    • 1dom an hour ago

      I learned about https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Assassination_market in the early 2010s. It wasn't phrased like a prediction market focusing on when a person would die, but more like a bounty. If the bounty/pot got big enough, eventually it would be worth it for someone to do it.

      Even thinking/writing about this now, it still makes obvious sense and I'm surprised it hasn't been seriously made yet with crypto: if there's a pot of billions, contributed to by millions, the incentive becomes not just about the money, but the adoration, protection and power that would come with doing so many people a favour.

      • nemomarx 27 minutes ago

        I think all the big targets for this kind of thing have the legal or government muscle to get in your way? Millions of people usually don't agree on someone dying unless they're powerful.

    • myhf an hour ago

      Every prediction market is an assassination market. They claim to trade on "information" but it's more like "influence", and easiest way to influence an event is usually by sabotage.

      • stronglikedan an hour ago

        a tale as old as time. e.g., fixing a fight or a game

  • variant_length 3 minutes ago

    This guy aaron doesnt sound very smart to me

  • whiteblossom 9 minutes ago

    Thank you for this piece! I'll be thinking about Aaron during lunch today.

  • andai 28 minutes ago

    > I thought Aaron’s credits would run out and that would be the end of it: he would finally get a job.

    Upon reading these words I experienced psychic damage from the blast of concentrated ambitionlessness.

  • shimman 10 minutes ago

    Reminds me of the Black Mirror episode "Shut up and Dance."

    Great story and creating the character Aaron. You did an excellent job in making a very believable person that I think most of us have run into in tech adjacent spaces.

  • alun an hour ago

    Very fun read. Thanks for posting it!

  • moralestapia an hour ago

    Man this piece should win an Emmy or something, it's so original and well written. I also couldn't spot much AI in there. Props to the author.

    >rhythmically ejected spurts of bright red blood

    Yeah man, like in music, synesthesia, I get you.

    Unsurprisingly the author also makes music: https://rorz.io/music

    One of his songs is called "Do androids dream of real sheep?"

    What a fresh take on that classic quote! Made me spurt my kombucha, lol.

    How can someone be SO talented. Thanks for sharing.

    • sarreph an hour ago

      Such kind words…! I’m so honoured and humbled. Thank you.

      P.S. - I didn’t use LLMs to write it, no! :)

  • 23david 28 minutes ago

    Great short story!!

  • stephenlf an hour ago

    Spooky and riveting!

    • sarreph an hour ago

      Thank you very much.