Why the em dash is attracting unfair suspicion

(theglobeandmail.com)

24 points | by throw0101a 5 hours ago ago

29 comments

  • jedberg an hour ago

    As a proficient writer who has been using proper grammar and em dashes for decades, it really makes me sad that writing with proper grammar and em dashes is now suspicious.

  • firasd 2 hours ago

    > (Disclosure: The Globe and Mail style guide mandates the use of en dashes, which is why you won’t see em dashes used here.)

    What does this mean? You can't use an en dash as a 'dash'. It's for specialized applications like saying 1994-1995 etc. I think the author (or whoever came up with this 'rule') is confused here

    • crazygringo an hour ago

      > You can't use an en dash as a 'dash'.

      Actually you can, and it's relatively common.

      One way—like this—is to use em dashes without surrounding spaces, to denote a pause.

      The other way – like this – is to use en dashes with surrounding spaces. This functions like an em dash, but is technically an en dash. The linked article has dashes like this throughout. (Then you still use an en dash for numbers like 11–13, but without the spaces.)

      It's just two different typographical conventions.

      Edit: to be clear, these are both still different from hyphens. In typesetting, don't ever do this-or this - as hyphens are for, well, hyphenation.

      • milchek an hour ago

        This is the way that I’ve been writing for years, mainly because I was too lazy to use the key or shortcut for em dash. But also because in school no one ever made a big deal about the length of the dash when writing - or I just wasn’t paying enough attention.

        • fzzzy an hour ago

          That’s a hyphen, not an en dash.

  • jtwoodhouse 5 hours ago

    Two things are true here. The em dash shouldn’t automatically be a sign of AI writing. That said, they’re also been quite overused in recent years, which is probably causing them to be overrepresented in models.

    You shouldn’t have that many asides to squeeze in, and you don’t need a em dash to make a sentence punchy. All tricks lose their power if you come to depend on them too much.

  • al_borland 5 hours ago

    As someone who bothered to learn the keyboard shortcuts for the em dash and ellipsis, this makes me sad.

    Even in posts not using these things, I’ve been accused of being an AI bot a few times now. I’m not sure what it is I’m doing that makes people think that. My natural reaction is to double down on whatever I was trying to explain, which seems to make things worse. Such is life…

    • unethical_ban 5 hours ago

      I used to secretly assume any comment on reddit that uses direction quotation marks ” “ vs " " are bot or AI generated. But I believe that's just how iOS does it?

      I wish a comment being completely vapid or trollish were indicator enough.

      • MarkusQ 5 hours ago

        You could just reserve your rancor for posts that are completely vapid or trollish — and ignore the issue of how they were created.

        It works for me.

        • unethical_ban 4 hours ago

          Bot content deserves all the derision trolls do.

          The best solution for me is to touch grass daily.

      • maratc 3 hours ago

        > that's just how iOS does it?

        MacOS, too.

      • zappb 3 hours ago

        I assume those are people who write their comments in MS Word and copy the text with its smart quotes.

        • vincent-manis 3 hours ago

          Sorry, I wouldn't be caught dead using Word. I use quotation marks because that is the correct punctuation.

      • whatamidoingyo 4 hours ago

        I have some blogs that make use of Markdown. " is automatically rendered as a ”. Likewise, "--" is rendered as an em dash.

    • carlosjobim 4 hours ago

      People are psychotic everywhere online and will accuse you of anything and everything if you're not 100% aligned with their views.

      • mikestorrent 3 hours ago

        Very much so! I used to write responses online in the classic GPT formula with lots of bullets etc. and now I am deliberately ensuring that I don't over-formalize grammar so as to provide people with a little bit of confidence that I'm real... for what it's worth.

        I used to spend a lot of time arguing online. Now, with Dead Internet Theory, it feels like it's just hammering home how useless that all was.

        • 7jjjjjjj 3 hours ago

          All those people on Reddit who never found "Shift" or "Enter" on their keyboard are laughing at us now.

      • BizarroLand 3 hours ago

        Even when you are, people are on average so paranoid and suspicious of random internet strangers with malintent that the concept of reading a response while assuming good intentions has been lost.

        • crmi an hour ago

          Yep — on mainstream AI YouTube videos, I see a lot of comment replies accusing anyone of commenting with ai (if its a well weitten post, with punctuation). Others chiming in "ran through ai detector, says 37% human 63% air — BOT" etc

          YT comments were never a good place, but it's interesting to see this shift now its hit the masses

          And interesting that no ones commenting about the robotic AI voice over... Instead pointing finger's at each other like the spiderman meme.

    • AlienRobot 4 hours ago
  • kelseyfrog 2 hours ago

    People are over-estimating the positive predictive value of the em dash.

    If you run it through Bayes theorem, the increase in probability that a given text is AI-generated if it contains an em dash is negligible.

    If you disagree share your prior, marginal, and likelihoods.

  • throw0101a 5 hours ago
  • pjs_ 5 hours ago

    All the coverage of emdash as LLM telltale inspired me to finally bother to learn how to type an emdash on a Mac keyboard…

    • mikestew 3 hours ago

      For those playing at home: Shift-Option-Hyphen.

      • msephton 2 hours ago

        And on iOS long press the hyphen key.

  • whatamidoingyo 4 hours ago

    Last year, I had a writing contract for a popular blog. They required us to use the em dash. I bet they're regretting that now.

  • AndyNemmity 4 hours ago

    People are reading a lot of AI generated text and adopting its format as well.

    • nativeit 3 hours ago

      That’s a great point. Let me see if I can find a new way to word my reply—specifically, I will read through the comments above this, and consider other perspectives that might be relevant—and then try to answer your question again.

      That’s a great point.

  • rcarmo an hour ago

    I have been using em dashes for over 20 years on my blog. This is just ridiculous…